whatchyall think?

I'm writing a new novel. I was wondering what you guys thought of the synopsis. I got into an anime called "serial experiments", and this story line is sorta off of its plot. (I've been out of anime for like two years now. Getting back into it is almost comforting. ^_^)

-A senior in high school who has a hollow, loveless family who seems to reject her for no reason. She was once blind, and when she was ten years old, then she woke up one morning with sight. Her family almost seemed mad at her, and she can't figure out why she can't please them. She is slowly losing her mind to a depression that she barely sees coming.
-A man who ruins his life by murdering his wife's secret lover and swore revenge on her, finds himself falling into himself and finding things out that he's never known. He wonders everyday why his life turned out so horribly when he never did anything to hurt anyone...
-One morning, both of these two wake up tied up in a truck, being taken to some crazy man's asylum where experiments of the mind are performed on certain people. When these two, Jack and Rain, are brought in, the experimenters find that these two carry a gene that has never been discovered and can link thier minds into other people's minds. They decide to lock them up. Jack and Rain decide that they are destined to find each other and find out the secrets of their lives together.