A lost love...
"Her bare feet grazed the cold tile of the balcony as she wandered out to see the view. Her ice cold blue eyes stared at the sky bathed in splatters of orange and red to form a breath taking sunset. She gripped the railing and tried to take it all in...the beauty of this place...The long inky strands of her nightmare-black hair began to blow in the cool evening breeze. Her lacy nightgown blew up, but she didnt bother to fix it...here she was home...here she didnt have cares or worries...she only had herself and him... the perfect man...
Slater, in all his perfect manly majesty stared at her from inside the room, seeing his ice queen with her porcelain white skin and beautiful black hair. She looked back at him, "join me...,"Her voice so compelling, he couldn't say no. He walked up behind her and wrapped his arms around her, and she felt his warmth consume her and she smiled, "did you ever imagine our lives to be this perfect?"
"ever since i first laid eyes on you I knew my life was perfect. This view...this apartment...they're just perks to me considering the kind of gift you are..." She grinned at his kindness and leaned back, sighing. Nothing in her life had come easy and now this...this perfect bliss just took her my storm filling her with a giddy happiness that she wasn't even able to comprehend let alone express. She turned and kissed him as the sun disapeared behind the snowy mountians and the orange and red rays in the sky thickened and began to transform into cooler, quieter colors. Her eyes softened as she began to feel that she was flying and fell back in Slater's arms, in a light sleep. He carried her into his bedroom and laid her on the soft silk sheets and pulled her hair out of her face. She was perfect to him. Every thing about her made him feel unworthy. Her personality was one that any woman would beg to have...her body satisfied his every pleasure. He leaned down and daintily kissed her lips, hearing her moan. He walked out, shutting the door...
seeing her so beautiful and radiant...made his betrayal all the more difficult..."
-from "Xira" by me.
8 comments:
this from my soon to be famous epic "xira" its probably my best writing i've ever done.
this story has a character just like me in it!
the perfect man!
hjaaaaaaa
good story so far!
js
i havent seen the beast or the harlot yet?
I dont think either is here
js
the beast and the harlot? thats not a story of mine...its a song by avenged sevenfold. i just like the name, so i named my blog that. ^_^ has nothing to do with my stories
I was kidding
just meant you didnt look like a beast or act like a harlot
thats all
j
I was kidding
just meant you didnt look like a beast or act like a harlot
thats all
j
oh i see. sorry i analyze too much sometimes. ^_^
I love this and i love your writing, gurl.
scott
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