gentle impulsion
""I hear noise...comforting noise...noise i've heard ever since i felt my coinsciousness...ever since i first felt the warmth of this place. I can easily see whats in front of me, but i wish i knew what all the noise was about. I kick, I'm a little uncomfortable.
I move about to get better situated. I hear The Voice sweet in my ears in a coaxing as i look up to see a dark object rub over my warm illuminated dome of warmth and peace. It must be Her hand rubbing to see if I'm alright. I rub back to tell Her I'm fine.
My mind races all the time since I have so much of it. I wonder all the time why I have to be in here...i wonder what i look like...what it's like outside my dome...what She looks like. With such a voice, She must be beautiful. And He speaks to me too, through my dome i hear His coaxing voice babying me. Why does everyone make such a big deal of me? I turn a little, moving my life cord so i can rest my head easier on my chest. Maybe a little sleep will rest my mind... I hear The Heartbeat race a little as Her Voice rises in falls in laughter, something i wish i could do. When i opened my mouth, nothing but misty bubbles came out. I wished i could sing like She could.
'Weeks have gone by now...When am i going to get to see Them? God, i'm so restless in here...wonder when.... My life cord sure is bugging me...' I can hear my thoughts in my head much like Her Voice, but it doesn't ring like hers does...i suppose it's because mine isn't a voice with a pitch...but more like an idea. I knew the first thing i would do when i got out was yell as loud as i could to hear my pitch. 'Wow...pretty light show' i thought as i looked around my dome. He and She must be in some pretty place. Maybe a dome with lights unlike mine, which is quite dark...
'Months now...I'm starting to think I'll never get out'. I kick the wall just for attention now. It seems to aggravate Her. She sits all the time now, and is constantly yelling. Maybe...She's sick? What does that mean for me?
'Wait, what's this? I'm moving! I'm coming out! She's letting me out!' I open my mouth to yell as the blinding light almost permanently shuts my eyes and i see the world... ""
- "Gentle Impulsion" by me
4 comments:
Hey, ummm (insert popular nickname for female). ^__^j/k
I thinks that's really sweet... Nobody ever considers this possibility... or at least they never argue from this point.
is this a part of a bigger story?
Maybe I'll just ask you in person. heehee ^__^
- W.
No it is its own story. But maybe it should be a bigger one. *ponders*
1- Yeah I love Evanescence! One of my favorite bands!
2- Yeah You're right about the Christian thing.. I just didn't want to go into that much detail. I'm posting about it again closer to Christmas, where I'll cover all that..
3- And education has always been corrupted and is getting worse in my eyes! You've got some views very similar to mine! spooky eh!
4- Wow this writing's amazing! You're really good at this! Nice knowing someone else out there shares some of my views and is good to read too!
Myk
why thanks, baby ^_^
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